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Bullet Lists Can Drain the Life from Your Fundraising—or Pump Up the Energy—Here's How

Bullet points are normally a helpful tool for making what youve written more readable.

When you have several similar points you need to make, a bulleted list can: 

  • Introduce visual variety, which increases readability.
  • Turn what would have been a long paragraph into an easily scannable entry point.
  • Organize your thinking, thus making it more clear.
  • Lower the reading level of your copy. 

All good.

But let me show you a type of bulleted list that hurts fundraising results:


The Good and Evil Words of Fundraising

Fundraising has two magic words. One is enchanting, the other has sinister force to weaken your writing. When you control these two words, as I explore in my book, How to Turn Your Words into Money, you can wield wizard-like powers.


The Seven Cardinal Rules of Fundraising Writing

Fundraising is a funny profession. It requires you to learn a specific style of writing that's unlike any other you're likely to have learned—such as business writing, journalism, or grant writing.


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